Focal Point—The part of a visual composition that attracts the viewer’s eye most quickly and holds it longest.
One of the things I like about graphite drawing is the range of values possible, especially with some of the softer leads.
One of the things I like about plein air drawing is the range of subjects. Yes, I gravitate most to organic things. Trees. Grass. Leaves. But there have been times when the door handle of a classic car or a crack in the sidewalk has sparked creativity. It’s a lot more fun than the serious work that is my day job.
But it’s more than just a fun drawing exercise. Life drawing—even if it isn’t plein air drawing—is a good way to hone the skills necessary for more serious drawing or painting. Consider composition and ways to make the focal point stand out, for example.
How to Draw a Strong Focal Point
Let’s look at this drawing of a Poinsettia, drawn from life in graphite some time ago.
The only tool I used was my trusty 6B pencil and a finger tip or two. Nothing special and nothing fancy.
I began by sketching the leaves, concentrating on placement, shape, and size. A detailed drawing wasn’t the goal. I was just sketching.
The shapes and layering of the leaves quickly drew me in, however, and after I’d sketched the major leaves, I began developing a composition around the lightest leaves… the colored leaves that form the flower.
Tips for Creating a Strong Focal Point
There are a few things you can do with every drawing to emphasize the focal point. The techniques I used for this simple drawing can be used with any drawing of any subject and in most media and methods. What are they?
Since the flower was quite light and my paper was white, the first thing I did was outline the leaves. The “flower leaves” are outlined with a heavier, firmer line than the leaves immediately beneath them. The leaves below those leaves are outlined with an even lighter line and some of the smallest, least significant leaves are barely outlined or not outlined at all. Why? Because the heavier and darker a line, the more it draws attention. Since the focal point is the flower, that’s where I put the darkest lines.
Next, I began shading, adding darker value to the green leaves and adding shadows where leaves overlapped. The darkest shadows are near the focal point; around the white leaves and in between them. As shadows move away from the focal point, I made them lighter even though they were all the same general value on the plant I was drawing.
In the areas immediately adjacent to the flower, I used heavy pressure, multiple layers, and blending to get the blackest black possible with a 6B pencil. In other areas, I reduced the pressure or the number of layers (sometimes both). I blended less frequently or blended with just one or two layers of graphite to make softer, lighter shadows. The reason behind this part of the process is simple. The strongest contrast—the lightest values and the darkest values—should occur at or around the focal point so they draw the eye.
The focal point of any drawing should contain the most detail and those details should be rendered more clearly and sharply than the details in any other part of the drawing. That means using line quality and contrast, but also minimizing or eliminating altogether details in other parts of the drawing. Why? Because detail naturally draws the viewer’s eye and holds it.
The small shapes at the center of this flower appear only in the center, so it was a simple matter to eliminate detail elsewhere. As already mentioned, I used lighter values and lines as I moved away from the focal point.
To make the flower even more dramatic, I shaded the negative space around the flower in the upper right corner. I didn’t want to make that too dark; I just wanted to emphasize the light value, so I did a couple of layers then blended with my finger, pulling graphite into the surrounding areas to keep the edges soft. The exception? The edges of the flower. They were kept as sharp and crisp as possible because sharp edges also draw the eye and put emphasis on the edge.
Finally, I rubbed in all of the negative space around the bottom of the drawing, including the lower leaves. I smudged the paper to darken it slightly by pulling graphite out of the leaves and into the background. Again, I kept the edges of the flower leaves as clean as possible, but even in this case, lightly shading the tips of them kept them from pulling the eye out of composition.
The Best Way to Draw a Strong Focal Point
Is to employ each of the techniques I described above.
You can make a strong focal point using only a few of these tricks of the trade, and there are other ways to also draw attention to your focal point. Each subject and each drawing will be different, so take a little time to decide on the best methods before you put pencil to paper.
To see how this process might look in color, read How to Make Your Subject Stand Out.
I have been painting , in many different mediums, since I was a kid but never focused on DRAWING with graphite…it’s my new adventure
Everybody needs an adventure. Colored pencils is certainly a good one!
This is so informative! I’ve picked up so many techniques from you, Carrie. I started coloring in coloring books about a year ago, and 3 months ago I started colored pencil art classes. Now, this article makes me want to revisit my love of graphite drawings, which I started doing without this much-needed information, about 30 years ago. There are so many things I’m thinking of doing now, thanks to your selfless sharing. Thank you so much!
You’re welcome and thank you for your very kind words.
Graphite is a fun medium. Very enjoyable for spontaneous drawing. It even makes a decent under drawing medium for colored pencil if you make sure to seal it before adding color. Otherwise, you end up with muddy, or dirty color!
Read both articles. Very helpful info. Thank you Carrie.
You’re welcome, Gail.